Analysis of Domina of the Forest Green

Lisa Campbell 1966 (Ohio)



Domina of the Forest Green
Hidden beneath a canopy of leaves
I dwell in a cave dark as death
And drink from the river of mother nature’s breast

I gather brush, branches and sage
Build a fire, and fan the flames
Bathed in moonlight and in the company of Fae
We dance and sing, I pray and I prey

I mix wildflowers, incense and seeds
A magical potion to serve all my needs
I stir and stir with a magical ladle
Old as time made of silver and hazel

I gather wishes from the old stone well  
Clear the cobwebs and cast a spell
I chant, I meditate and I scry
And ponder who may live or die

The pure most heartfelt desires come true
Selfish and greedy, times three return to you
Hope is given to good souls lost
A coin in the fountain and fingers crossed

I am the pith of legend and lore
Light, shadow, calm and storm
From the darkest heart conjured into creation
I broke through the vail of twisted imagination

A crown of elderberry and twigs of thyme
Sets atop muddy locks of braided vine
Eyes that see what is yet to be
I am Domina of the forest green


Scheme AXXX XXBC DDEE FFCB GGHH XXII XXXA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (29%)
Metre 01010101 1001010011 11001111 011010110101 11011001 10100101 10100010011 110111011 1110101 01001011111 11011010010 1111110010 1101010111 1010101 11110011 01011111 011101011 10010110111 11101111 0100100101 110111001 11101 101011001010 111011100010 01110111 1011011101 11111111 1101010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,055
Words 214
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

This is my first attempt at creating a fictional character based in lore. I hope you enjoy.

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Written on April 03, 2022

Submitted by lisacampbell29 on April 03, 2022

Modified by lisacampbell29 on June 26, 2022

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Lisa Campbell

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