Analysis of A Wish with love



If wishes would come true, I would have first wished for you.
If a dream would come true, we would be starting at a blue sea view.
If a thought would come true,  you would be happy forever, that's true.
If you have wishes you want it to come true, i will be a Genie for you.

If the Sun would shine brighter, seeing you it would hide.
If the moon found its beauty, seeing you it would shy.
If the stars blinked just once, seeing you it would glitter all night.
If you have wishes you want it to come true, i will be a Genie who stands by your side.

If the birds could sing a song, hearing you thy'ed sing all day.
If the wind would flow so strong, feeling you it would fade away.
If the sea would run so deep, touching you its water would melt.
If you have wishes you want it to come true, i will be the Genie who would feel what you felt.

If i had three wishes to give, i would steal and give you 300 more.
If i had a place that could make you happy, i wouldn't share it with anyone anymore.
If i was a Genie for real, i would make everything above come true.
Sorry, as I have only love for now, that i can give to you.


Scheme AAAA BXXB CCDD EEAA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 1101111111111 1011111111010111 1011111111001011 1111011111111101011 1011110101111 1011110101111 101111101111011 1111011111111101011111 101110110111111 101111110111101 101111110111011 11110111111111010111111 111110111110111 111011111101101111001 11101011111100111 1011110111111111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,122
Words 250
Sentences 16
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 53
Words per line (avg) 15
Letters per stanza (avg) 213
Words per stanza (avg) 58
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Submitted by Hollythereaper on February 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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