Analysis of Setting Sun



The days and nights run together
It seems
I have lost count
Of all of my dreams
That were supposed to come true
Because of you
But I'm left with just
This unevenness
That you can't undo
For a moment on some nights
Our conversations play
Over and over
Like a banging drum
That is constant
But it's okay to me
Because I don't mind
Hearing your voice
Time after time
I watch the sunset with the hopes that you
Are under the same sky
Watching it, too
And my heart skips that familiar beat
When I feel the heat
Of your fingertips on my skin
But it's just the wind
And the darkness of the night
Pulls me in
And reminds me
You are not here
I am not there
A little tear
Falls from my eye
And I try
To compromise with the night
But it's useless
And all I can do
Is watch the sun set
While my hopes and dreams
Set with it, too.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 781
Words 168
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 39
Lines Amount 39
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 641
Words per stanza (avg) 168
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Written on July 28, 2021

Submitted by Linmayzie on July 28, 2021

Modified by Linmayzie on July 28, 2021

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