Analysis of Numbers



Though your time has come I’m sorry to inform you
That your ashes had no family to go to
And that society’s ideals are so sadistic
That your untimely death has been made into a statistic

They do not care about you
About what your legacy will turn into
They care more about the numbers
They don’t care about your slumber

And in the time of your recent demise
We see your mother and your father, tears are filling their eyes
Because your spirit has been turned into a number
Now rest easy, I will leave you to your slumber


Scheme AABB AAXC DDCC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 111111101011 111011100111 0110111010 110101111010010 1111011 01111001101 11101010 11101110 0001111001 111100110111011 0111011101010 111011111110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 515
Words 100
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 139
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

This poem was made to represent the fact that we as a society trivialize death and use it as a statistic where it is opportunistic.

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Written on June 11, 2021

Submitted by adandrade1607 on June 11, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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