Analysis of Daddy Can You Hear Me

Eva Joy Blevins 1988 (Paramount)



Daddy, can you hear me?
Even when the words don't come out right.
Daddy, did you feel me?
Even though I wasn't there that night.
Daddy, I feel your presence,.
Even though you aren't here.
Daddy, I know you protect me
From everything that I fear.
Daddy, I look up at the night sky
Blue twinkling stars remind me of your eyes.
Daddy, I surely miss you
 More than you realise
Daddy, I feel so lonely
Since you went back home
Daddy, I know you surround me
When I feel alone.


Scheme ABABCDAEFGHCAIAJ
Poetic Form
Metre 101111 101011111 101111 101110111 1011110 1011101 10111011 110111 101111011 11001011111 1011011 1111 1011110 11111 10111011 11101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 459
Words 91
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 358
Words per stanza (avg) 91
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Eva Joy Blevins

Eva Blevins was born to Victoria Kathleen Weehunt and Glenn Weldon Jennings Jr. On June 27, 1988 in Paramount California. The youngest of 14 children, Eva often found herself singing or writing to clear her mind of any feelings. Poetry helped her conquer fears of tests, depression, anxiety, and even the joys and sadness of love. Eva is a mother of two children Kai Weldon Jennings and Lyric Fame Blevins of whom are her world. more…

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