Analysis of The nearly man

JP. 1948 (United Kingdom)



THE NEARLY MAN

Defend your space as best you can
It was just an eye contact, a flash in the pan
Erect the defence but do it now
This one got through but you don’t know how

So little in common not like you at all
You are safe in that fortress the walls are so tall
Looking down from your tower, aloof and alone
He can see but not touch through six feet of stone

Yet something just happened but you cannot say what
As you felt the ties loosen in that Gordian knot
No it cannot be him he seems brash and so coarse
And a little too physical astride that white horse

What you need is gentle and not found in a man
 Taking solace from solitude that is your plan
But there is something about him as he waits at the gate
An enigma so curious you cannot relate

Will you speak or stay silent? Just smile let him pass?
Is it already too late to relieve this impasse?
Will he wait or be gone as quick as he came?
Not given the chance to know this lady’s name

As your gossamer favour falls wisp like from the tower
Allowed to fall freely by a hand of the hour
You walk but not run to examine your fate
Thoughts filled with the possible you did not contemplate

Cast down he has left but you cannot think why
On the high road to quest when you let him pass by
And your heart is imprisoned by a vision you saw
As you ponder what might have been still you want more

As you walk the ramparts hoping that he will return
Scouring horizons you secretly yearn
To see once again If only you can
That very same nearly, Oh so nearly man


Scheme A AABB CCDD XXEE AAFF GGHH IIFF JJXX KKAA
Poetic Form
Metre 0101 01111111 11111101001 010011111 111111111 11001011111 111011001111 101111001001 11111111111 110110111011 1110110011001 111011111011 0010110001111 111110011001 10101101111 11110011111101 1010110011001 111111011111 1101011101101 11111111111 1100111111 1110011111010 0111101011010 11111101011 111010011110 11111111011 101111111111 0111010101011 111011111111 111011011101 10001011001 1110111011 11011011101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,487
Words 306
Sentences 5
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 133
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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