Analysis of Walking Your Path



Until I wore your over sized scrawny shoes…
 Scuttling through harrowing dark tunnels,
 Dodging  bullets and bombs,
I never knew where it pinched.

Until my roof was scalped...
Like a bald vulture in rain, drenched,
Flapping its wet wings, perched  on the carcasses of my home
 homelessness seemed a strange dream!

Until my plate filled to the brim with nothing to savor…
 I never understood why stale sandwiches  and  browned radishes
were indeed a cuisine you relished with vigor

Till my garment was filled with moth,
Stained with blood and dirt
From crawling on all fours, over decomposing bodies
I couldn’t comprehend why you were always in rags!!!

Do  forgive all my oversight…
I failed to  understand your sorrow
Blasé to your plight, with no thought of tomorrow
Drinking Chardonnay with friends all night

I thought myself immune to the vagaries of war
Till my soul was  intoxicated with grief..
Heartache from the blatant waste of life…
No longer able to deny the massacres!!!

Please forgive me...
For acting all uppity and tight
 When all you needed was a portion of my tithe
...my time and my voice!


Scheme XXXX XXXX AXA XXXX BCCB XXXX XBXX
Poetic Form
Metre 01111101101 1001100110 101001 1101111 011111 10110011 10111110100111 1001011 01111101110110 110011110001100 001001110110 11101111 11101 1101111001010 1101110101 1011110 11101110 1111111101 100101111 111011010011 1111010011 11010111 110101010100 1011 110110001 111101010111 11011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,134
Words 210
Sentences 9
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 125
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

Dedicated to all internally displaced people. Especially those displaced by the ongoing wars in Sudan, Ukraine and Palestine.

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Written on May 17, 2024

Submitted by Abbykesington on May 17, 2024

Modified by Abbykesington on May 18, 2024

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