Abbykesington
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This is a beautiful poem. "The spring skips it season" just got me!

Such is life... Thanks for bringing it to our consciousness

The sadness and loss are quite palpable... Thanks for sharing.

You have written with such eloquence , this battle you fight. I pray for God's grace to renew and restore your memory. Please don't give up the fight!

Nice poem. Great you can put your feelings to words. I like that you acknowledged your limitations in meeting a need though it makes you "cry", you still want the best for the other person...

thank you for seeing the deeper meanings of this poem. So much innocent heads already!!!

This poem depicts a picture of what can be achieved in unison... Thank you for sharing.

" This battle has already been won". Gives reassurance

What an odd enchantment to keep all spirits blessed

This isn't just noise! You are doing a good work sharing your reality through poetry. Keep writing

So vivid, it was like watching Nat Geo Wild!!! The elk indeed "danced with fate" and triumphed! Great work. Thanks for sharing...

Honest. Humane. Truth. "You have to have dark to appreciate light"! Very reverberating....

This is a lovely poem that speaks to the beauty and wisdom that comes with age. I love how you personified the tree with " wrinkle lines, sometimes very thick but alo fine."

Thanks. We need to be appreciative of now...

I particularly like the paradoxes of death and life, lie and truth, pride and humility.....