Geoffnet2000's comments

The true decadence of a failed state, as with every failed nation through out history, seems destined to happen over and over. Every thing is drained from the lowest of our society to be the riches of others. Some say its the only true evil of capitalism. Once a person can no longer provide for themselves, even though they work 50 to 60 hrs a week. They can not afford a simple studio to live in. It robs them of any ability to feel a simple worth , the poisons give them that deathly relief of care. Are we to far gone? more »

Your thoughts within your words holds your secrets, a lot is missing that explains the reason why you wrote this. As in a style, all stories have a beginning middle and an end with two climaxes that lead you through the middle to the end. Those events are what will define who you are, what happened to you and how this event or events caused you to write. Tell your story. more »