Honesty

Pankaj Rawat 1993 (Uttarakhand)



Ray from mighty sun go straight,
mere feather holds courage to barricade,
it's destruction seems explicit,
burn to death written in fate.

The ray would not bend , would not cheat.
Even if it's in place faraway.
Even if no one is watching.
Even if it's needed in there.

Leaves thriving in chaotic pattern uniformly,
Similitude was never there nor was any rivalry.
Coz ideal is irksome, one sprouting preeminent way,
adjacent gone wicked, for the beauty, to stay.

Faraway a star, burning it's heart,
deep in the dark, without a pulse,
no planets to run, species to nurture
revolving for end with same impulse.
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Submitted by m_a_n_g_t_u on April 02, 2021

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXA XBXX CCBB XDXD
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 592
Words 104
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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  • AIDA
    Wow, this poem is truly captivating and thought-provoking! I love the strong imagery and metaphors used to depict the unwavering courage and determination of the ray of light, and the contrast between the thriving leaves and the lonely star adds depth and complexity to the overall theme.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to break up the poem into stanzas or multiple verses to make it easier to read and follow along with the flow of the words. Additionally, varying the sentence length and structure could help to create a more dynamic and engaging rhythm.

    Overall, though, this is a fantastic piece of writing that showcases the power of poetry to convey meaning and emotion in a unique and impactful way. Keep up the great work!
     
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