Sorrowful Seperation.



Our life was ruined like the silence,
Shattered by a whip of thousand screams,
My eyes were closed, but I carried on with your guidance,
You never sleeped, but still you had dreams,
A misfortune brought rain clouds above us,
The crashing raindrops never can stop,
A predicted suffering it was.

Our love was killed like an animal,
Shot by a grim and obsessed hunter,
A woman dressed in flowers at our funeral,
We died like pushed into an enormous inferno,
I was screaming while dragged down to the hell,
You were crying, and shedding feathers from your wings,
Your black tears around your heart made a shell,
I'm broken, but the memory of you joy for me still brings.
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABABXXX CXCXDEDE
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 652
Words 120
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 7, 8

John Berch

I grew up like any other normal child. If we're talking about scars i fell down on my head when i was 3 years old and now i've got a little scar there. I could say my life began when i was 14. My first serious relationship and stuff, the beginning of understanding life and things. Then i began to drink and smoke because of my the leaving of my parents. Things didn't go pretty well so life made me begin to steal. Well i'm glad that thing has passed by and i'm not into it anymore. I began to write when i was 15 years old. Also in the fog made by alcohol and some other things in my life it made me to act like a jerk to people and to hate society. Then i flunked a year at 8th class and began my second life. I haven't stopped drinking and smoking but i don't think that it's a thing that is slowing down life. The thing that has changed since then is my lifestyle and the acceptance of society. Also more interests and none of the less new problems have occured in my life but i can freely say that ain't nothing slowing me down and i'm living with full potential. I think i'm going to continue writing as long as i have the will to do it and i don't think that it's going to dissapear soon :)Also if you want to contact me, say thanks or just to know me, my skype nickname is : kinderz666 more…

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