Our House



you are so truly missed
my dear poet friends!

the day-to-day continues empty!
without that touch of sweet
without romantic mist
those question signs with open ends
I'm looking forward to re-entry...

our house of valor and despair
where kings get drunk upon lush favors
of lifeless joy and happy times
exquisite colors, lovers, haters
the punishments without their crimes
where love is formulated through mistakes,
high stakes and fluff of word of mouth
your holy grail is his carafe
in humoresque is owned by atheist giraffe!
3 liner sets of mortal moral moras!
high cumulus above us - soars, so as
I read the works that phantoms share
I dare...to leave my thoughts
in humble corner of your posting
where coy is next to hellish roasting
where we can simply talk
no want for face to face
where poetry resides
in it's naive...all-knowing grace

you are so truly missed
my dear poet friends...
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AB cxabc defefxxggbxdxhhxixi AB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 862
Words 156
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 5, 19, 2

Didar Baizhanov

Somewhere between my birth in the land-locked nation of Kazakhstan and becoming U.S. Merchant Marine officer - poetry became something of a satellite in my travels through life ;) ____________________ My most sincere Thank You! for the feedback! ____________________ Here are some poems that I liked (here on Lulu), please give appropriate authors your comments if you get a chance:- October Hearts by PoetryofJune - High(Coup) by JayS (haiku) - Tranquility by Beccanine - Nemesis by Timothy Francis Savage - My Bright Place by Zenocyde - I Fought in a War by Justin R Esplin (haiku) - Love Blooms by Dee Edgett - A Haiku: Violin Music by Clara B. Ray - Cigarettes by faustus - Implode by Elise Hadden - Haiku: Violet Roses by PoetryofJune - The Friend I Didn't Want - Ryan Wong :) - Plus Infinity by Neli Fatu de Valahia - Never Good; Never Bad by Graham Geiger - Two Snowflakes by Kiran - With a grey sky by Spirals - Pine Needles by Matthew Lerette - Bound Again by Danny Warren Patterson - Lie-F by RomanoJohnson - A Child's Memory of a War by Change - A Cold November Day by Bonchance - El espejo roto (The Broken Mirror) by Taqua-------------------------------- more…

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