love you
Stars rained on me .
I was happy with my moon .
But my moon fell for another sun. Damn .
I prayed nobody listened .
I cursed myself ,
and I am a dead duck now .
The Sun is happier ,
The moon more beautiful .
I watch her waning and waxing .
I dont keep my beloved in a jar ,
but I am always moon-splashed ,
feeling it every second.
I watch it all the time , but the moon said I ignore her .
I am just too small to be noticed .
I never wanted you .
I just wanted the moonlight.
But , moonlight feels alien now .
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Submitted on January 06, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | XXX AXB CXX XXA CXX XB |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 493 |
Words | 98 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2 |
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