Longing



Longing to have a word with you,
Don't know what I should expect, petrified inside feeling like a mirror which would eventually break.
Confused if I should've said it or not,
But I was dying to express myself and you were the only one.

Sincerely apologize if I said too much,
I just could not stop myself, my mind and heart pacing at a rush,
Wish you'd know the guilt I feel, the things I sense so much within.
If only I could say time would heal, hoping someday you would feel.
(For there's only one thing I'd ever want to steal, your entire attention forever I'd seek)

Falling down like the rain, silent sounds tears of pain,
With every drop that goes down the drain, is a moment I'd wished that you I could attain.
Thank you for moments I'd treasure throughout my life, for being the sweetest girl I'd ever met.
There's no doubt that you're one of a kind, so no matter please do always smile.
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Submitted on August 26, 2014

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Mohamed Azumee

I liked to be called a poet or a lyricist. I attempt to explore and find out my true potential, for every day is a day one learns. I like to write what I feel mostly, surely words are felt from the mind and heart. I hope you enjoy my work. Feedback is always welcome. Some poems are very old since they were archived from the old site. Kudos to Hall of Fame :)I am 28 now. I have been writing since I was 12 and a member of poetry.com so some poems that are old since 2000 or 2002 may sound childish but hopefully would be an enjoyable read. more…

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