lonely lonely



Lonely, Lonely
Lonely is this room that I sit in
With my hopes and dreams running thin
All that I see left for us is lust
The feeling of two bodies in pleasure is a must
Where is the love I may never know
You ran away before it had a chance to grow
But it grew in me
It was something that you refused to see
You never told me you loved me you only showed me you cared
When Im in dire need you are there
When are you going to stop and breath
See what I see
When are you going to do something for your self
Im not even talking about myself,
but for you what is wealth
What is it to be rich?
Is it to be living like this
Is to struggle everyday
To let the beautiful things in your life just get away
Lonely , lonely I sit here in this room
I guess that just the way its going to be I have to assume
By the time you get your feet on the floor
What I feel for you would be no more
The love that I feel is dieing by the day
Its been happening since you pushed me away
I tried my very best but it seemed you tried harder
I Thought I knew how to save this but you were smarter
Many tears I cried to let you see the pain
But you didnt see it in the rain
The rain being all the responsibilities
The ones that you have always put between you and me
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

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Melissa Torres

These are but written photos of my life, my mind, and those around me captured as best as I could in words. I'm not a trained writer so my style is of no particular way. I have long detailed poems and short to the point ones. My hope is that you can see what I have seen feel what i felt with out braking your head trying to figure out what I meant. Enjoy! more…

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