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I Wish Upon

earthy_emily

I wish upon the brightest star
To light the night with wonders of heart
Even in the darkest of hour
A blooming flower shines the colour

For this feeling of hurt inside
Seems to be a never-ending story
Covered by the mist so white
I wonder why it loses its glory

Never again, never will
He says with all his willing
Not that I want you still
Take a step and find your healing

Then I wish upon the sun
To chase away that gloomy shine
Just a warmth of touch by one
Let me find this love again..
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AXXA XBXB CDCD EXEX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 476
Words 99
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
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