I Feel Him There



Like the wind that can't be seen
Which blows gently through my hair
Upon closing my eyes and breathing deep
I can magically feel him there

Like summer rain that softly falls
Its warm drops bathe my skin when bare
As the water trickles and cleanses all
I embrace myself and I feel him there

Like the sun that shines so bright
I absorb its warmth, its heat and glare
Always engulfed by its dazzling light
I look up toward it and I feel him there

Like the blood that flows through my veins
My heart palpitates in a rhythm that's rare
This man has touched me in many ways
Thus, I'll always feel him there
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Submitted on April 02, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA XAXA BABA XAXA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 585
Words 116
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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