Greeting



Wind howling against his face.
Oh how he hates this place.
Full of thick and balmy air.
Wearing a cold blank stare.

Walking toward the fading sun.
The path he follows is the only one.
Sore shoulders start to sag.
Wipes his face with an old rag.

A new life ahead he hopes to begin.
But, as he approaches his hopes grows dim.
Hoping to see his love with fair hair.
But only a tombstone greets him there.
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Submitted by Brokenoifvet on September 30, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDD XXBB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 390
Words 78
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

John Lowe

I rode as a bullrider on the pro rodeo circut for several years.I also was deployed to Iraq four times during OIF and was injured 3 times.My poems come from the heart break of being apart and the love of what I do and have done. more…

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