Crack and lonely



They left enough of the drug there in the bag for me
I almost fell headfirst

The blinking brain gave me incentives
Those salty pieces that I would have to burn
Suddenly I became a vibrating pidgeon
Nothing in the brain but the search for a place to rest

I guess you thought it important
Angels on sticks
As I curved down from the old rock wall
In pieces the carnaval melody didn´t move me.

Your narcotics are stronger
And i´ve seen boys snought glue
And i´ve seen boys huff petrol
Girls take lines!
But you put me on speed dial with crack

The pidgeon invited paranoia and other unwelcome guests
I tried to escape and got myself even closer toward the center of hell
Thank god it was but two snorts.
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Submitted on April 15, 2015

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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
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Words 135
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 5, 3

Simon Elliott

Throughapoetseye.blogspot.comSimon Bernard Elliott.International poetry.It´s about creativity and real expression.I am a traveller, I´ve lived all over the world. Always in close proximity to nature and poetry. I´ve written since I was sixteen now I am 31. I aim to open people´s eyes with my poetry. I aim to entertain and also to provoke reactions. If I can do any of these things- I think the hours spent writing will all be worth it. more…

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