Carved In Stone



The sea breathes in and out,
lapping at the shores of doubt.
While I look for traces of God,
among the stars scattered about.

Tracing the path martyrs trod,
I view their beliefs as flawed.
Preaching hell and damnation,
they infer God's love's a fraud.

The truth's the soul's foundation,
never yielding to temptation.
And like a cascading wave,
it questions salvation.

Fearing what lies beyond our graves,
we become religious slaves.
And pray we're not alone,
believing that Jesus saves.

I have some sins to atone,
yet can't place God on a throne.
He's a whisper not a shout,
and He isn't carved in stone.
 
 
(An "Interlocking Rubáiyát".)
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Submitted on October 10, 2013

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Scheme AABA BCDC DDXD EEFE FFAF X
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 634
Words 114
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 7

Emile Pinet

I was born in a small town, (Bathurst) New Brunswick, Canada,. The third eldest of thirteen children, ten girls and three boys. I’m the product of a semi-dysfunctional family, brought up by a controlling, physically abusive father, verses a loving mother. Many of my poems reflect the uniqueness and special circumstances of my upbringing. more…

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