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- love you was like a waterfall

nici

loving you was like a waterfall

fearful yet beautiful
I fell into you.

I came, I saw
All your demons,
yet feelings deepen.

loving you was like a waterfall

learning to run before I crawled
my love for you sprawled.

I came, I saw
all in all,
no flaw.

loving you was like a waterfall

waiting for every phone call,
time shared so small.

I came, I saw,
but all in all,
loving you is my fatal flaw.
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Submitted by nicipelliott on June 24, 2019

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Scheme A xx Bxx A cc Bab A aa Bab
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 377
Words 78
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 3
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