My love, my love…



Where are you now?
Did you meet your pal?
Are they doing those things
in the way that you’d planned?

Are there things to distract
from “the new flesh” unwrapped -
or d’you need nothing more
than a scratch on the back?

These questions unsaid,
but responses all guessed -
I’ll speak to you later.

I’ll see you in bed.
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Written on May 20, 2024

Submitted by Sleekwood on May 20, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX XXXX AXX A
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 331
Words 69
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 1

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