My empty love



You talked a good one ,
But let me fall .
We made a baby then you dropped the ball .
Family broken but heart remained the same ,
Until we couldn't handle the silence and I put you to shame .
You never knew what you had ,
Still you trying to walk around tall .
Babe you keep forgettin how you had it ,
but lost it all .
Yu sacrificed my child for your personal needs ,
then claimed you were a family man and  you knew effort was a must,
Everyday I looked at you with more disgust.
I hoped Yu saw it in me how i became empty becuz of you ,
But Yu never seen it coming
Yeah baby you never had a clue .
How much all of your cheating created my hate for you .
Thought you were grown now , but never had any game .
Shut up and go deal with them lames .
You said he wouldnt help me but I crumbled at his feet

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Some things I guess just aren’t meant to be .

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Written on May 16, 2024

Submitted by Positiverose89 on May 17, 2024

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Scheme ABBCCDBEBFGGHIHHCFJ
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 815
Words 178
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19

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