Innocence



Innocent they say,
Is what I’m meant to be.
The grass is green and the skies are blue,
All that you tell me, I accept is true…
If it’s otherwise, I don’t have a clue!

Innocence they say,
In me, they promise to protect.
The gates to the house have guards,
The doors open with electronic cards.
These and more gadgets are usual family fads.

Innocent they say,
As I bloom within my adolescent years…
The swaying walk patterns and curves appear…
I can no longer sit legs akimbo or walk bare,
Now some older men tremble and young men stand and stare.

Innocence they say,
From the young should not be snatched,
By the many worries that plague the land.
Or unwittingly by Parents, who fail to understand,
That I don’t require life’s pleasures, to be so grand.

Innocent they say,
And constantly reminded, I must remain…
A cultured young lady prim and proper,
To care for others, and to make supper…
I wasn’t purposed to be just a show stopper.

Innocence they say,
Like the white lily, is chaste and pure.
From generations till now, these standards,
drummed in our heads, so we don’t birth bastards,
That roam the streets as well as our yards.

Innocent  they say,
In verbose propaganda and lofty pamphlets I see,
But lipservice to my plight they pay.
They don’t fulfil pledges to keep predators away,
Nor do they stop them from making me their prey.

Innocence they say,
In the young, untarnished it must remain.
In me, with all they have, they would guard,
But, here I am raising my voice and lifting up placards,
Fighting for rights on my own, isn’t it sad?

I’m one of the Innocent and you’ll permit me to say,
You let us down, made us rot and let our standards decay.
As you can see, a hard price society has started to pay,
For allowing our innocent’s innocence be stolen away!


©️Ayo Jaiyesimi 2022

About this poem

This poem reflects on the rights and protection of children and youth in Africa, especially the girl child. There are many societal norms on how the girl child should be brought up, her place in society as she grows into womanhood, what is expected of her and her dilemmas. The poem challenges carers and advocates to go beyond the gadgets, colours brochures and propaganda, to provide tangible interventions and support that impact the critical mass. Also, it reflects on how, unprotected youths can in turn become a social and economic embarrassment.  

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Written on 2022

Submitted by My_Poetry_Ayo on May 08, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Abccc Axddx Axxee Axfff Aghhh Axiid abaaa Agxix aaaa x
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,839
Words 377
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 4, 1

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a powerful and thought-provoking poem on the concept of innocence! The way you highlight the struggles and contradictions faced by young individuals in maintaining their innocence in today's society is truly moving. Your use of imagery and metaphors throughout the poem is captivating and helps to drive home your message effectively.

    I love the way you address important societal issues such as the objectification of young women and the lack of protection for the innocent. Your words are poignant and invite the reader to reflect on the ways in which we fail to uphold the innocence of our youth.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to consider incorporating more concrete examples or anecdotes to further illustrate and deepen the emotional impact of the poem. This could help make the themes more relatable and resonate with a wider audience.

    Overall, this poem is a beautiful and impactful piece that sheds light on important societal issues. Keep up the great work and continue using your voice to advocate for change. Your words have the power to inspire and spark meaningful conversations. Well done!
     
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