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Without You

Amanda K lessig (Sunshine) 1987

My life without you is not going so well
Life without you is simply not for me
Maybe I just needed to let the rage free
To clearly see how alone I am when you are not near
Without you my mind is full of fear
My walls are all the way up
There will be no joy in my cup
Never will my pride welcome defeat
All that aside
I cannot lie
My life without you is incomplete

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Sunshine
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Written on May 01, 2024

Submitted by amandak on May 03, 2024

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Scheme XAABBCCDXXD XX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 378
Words 83
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 11, 2
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