Electrons In A Skull Cavity



Obsession with distraction from the fact that your death is coming.

It is likely near, and it will probably hurt forra long time.

Your brain.

A whirling cloud of electrons inna skull cavity.

One minute those electrons are gonna whirl away from your spine.

And never return.

And you stand, stand and tell me those are yours.

And you insist those are yours.

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Originally published on DeviantArt. A video presentation of this performed by the author is on his YouTube channel.

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Written on July 05, 2022

Submitted by TheProphetObblonge on April 14, 2024

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Scheme X X X X X A A
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 364
Words 77
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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