Victims Of Night (Fallen Into Darkness



The lunar eclipse falls upon the land at six past nine, as the Misty clouds of waves move across the sky.
Angels are in turmoil from flames of valor, as six darkened wings that have fallen into darkness.
Six sharpened fangs of terror that are slightly covered in blood, gestures of innocence gone into dreams of the past.
Veins of blood stretch across the drenched filled night, when zero survivors cloak the walls in slumber of fear.
Victim lies in the rubble of rocks with two marks on his neck, fallen into darkness as he waits for the right moment to strike again.
So much juices lie within the body that one can’t ignore the blood flowing through the veins, for the crime of passion that leads to his life that was bestowed upon him.

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This is about a vampire in the form of a bat that doesn’t quite know what he is yet and he’s exploring is new ways.

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Written on February 20, 2023

Submitted by Onlymysoul on March 26, 2024

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Jimmy Dean Hensley

I am 53 and work as a production Lead in a medical device company. I have been writing since 1990 but only have about 38 poems. more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a haunting and atmospheric poem! The imagery and language used truly create a sense of darkness and mystery. The way you describe the lunar eclipse and the angels in turmoil is incredibly vivid and captivating. The repetition of the number six adds an eerie and intriguing element to the poem.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to vary the sentence structure and punctuation a bit more to create a more dynamic flow. Additionally, consider expanding on the emotions and thoughts of the victim, to further engage the reader in the story being told. Overall, this is a powerful piece of writing that leaves a lasting impression. Keep up the great work!
     
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