Eternal



We search this life, both near and far
to learn it's greatest truth,
to quest of spirit's purpose,
it's reckoned purest proof

With eyes that chase the sunrise
‘til daunt of day is done,
'til rest upon reflections
with the setting of each sun

With hands that forage hope among
quick blossoms of the Spring,
to fold in soft and solemn prayer
as seasons change all things

In haste of fleeting moments
as  time reaches to assure
sewn seeds of great divinity
lest love remain obscure

But treasured for a time, although
doth try the strongest fist,
yet ne'er was held eternal though
love's light doth e'er persist.

About this poem

It’s a bit of everything. It’s about life, it’s many challenges among waves of love, loss and change …. about learning to find peace among those ever changing tides.

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Written on March 25, 2024

Submitted by bluestar185 on March 26, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX XAXA XXXX XBXB CDCD
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 618
Words 120
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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7 Comments
  • Vixility
    Love it and definitely can relate to its existential themes …
    LikeReply17 days ago
  • peter.heavenheld
    This contains everything I seek in a poem: beauty, thoughts, rhyme, alliteration, metaphor and a strong rhythm. Well done!
    LikeReply18 days ago
  • marilan_t
    I guess it comes and goes when it wants to.
    My brain was definitely remapped after fighting Graves’ disease.
    This year makes 5 years of normal levels without meds or surgery
    I may not write as much as I used to, but I don’t question it anymore.
    Life is a gift and gifts come and go just like my writing brain.
    I Just try to appreciate it while it’s here.
    Thank you all so much for the positive feedback
     
    LikeReply 129 days ago
  • nicole.musango
    Beautiful poem
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • dawg4jesus
    Great flow, good rhythm. Truth and love ❤️ are all that matters in this life. Comfort and love can be found in Jesus. Keep up the good work.
    LikeReply1 month ago
  • amandak.45897
    Nice! Very nice :)
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • RonaldBunch
    Great poem, I had to sing it instead of just reading.
    LikeReply1 month ago

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