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Two hearts that beat as one

Tyrone peck 1963 (Kerrville Tex)

Ode
A heart strong,a heart true,
A heart dedicated only to you.
And it is with much love, honor, and respect,
The heart I have for you.
And it is this heart the same,
That we must have for each other.
In order for God to pull us through,
And keep us together forever.

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Written for my wife

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Written on March 13, 2024

Submitted by tyrone_p on March 13, 2024

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Scheme AABACDAD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 263
Words 61
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Positive feedback: This poem exudes a sense of deep love, dedication, and commitment. The imagery of two hearts beating as one is powerful and the sentiment of staying together forever is heartwarming.

    Improvement suggestions: Consider incorporating more vivid and specific imagery to enhance the emotional impact of the poem. Additionally, try to vary the structure and rhythm of the poem to create a more dynamic flow. Adding some unique metaphors or similes can also help to make the poem more engaging and memorable.     
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