Out at sea



Out on the ocean surrounded by the stormy grey seas
The longing for family and home is all that bothers me
I can weather a storm, lightning, thunder, and all
We can not stop for a broken stern or falling tree

We sail through the storm only one man’s been lost
We have much to do today to have that be the only cost
Now mastless and limping I man one of the oars
As the men and I row and refuse to exhaust

Now with shore in sight, we begin to rejoice
We are home at last, the flag of victory we hoist
When an awful wave comes and capsizes our vessel
Save my brethren or go home, that is the choice

Which pain do I choose to burden?

About this poem

This poem was written for my school's Kalliope. The theme for this issue was voyage, aligning with our year's theme of the Oddesy and Illiad. It is a poem about a shiphand traveling on the sea and longing for home and the trials he goes through to get there. In the end, he has to decide whether to save his comrades or to finally get his dream of returning home.

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Written on February 29, 2024

Submitted by BrianZ.Jackson on March 11, 2024

Modified by BrianZ.Jackson on April 18, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA BXXB CXXC X
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 635
Words 133
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 1

Brian Z. Jackson

Brian Z. Jackson is a poet born in NJ in 2006. He has gone through a lot in his relatively short time being alive and writes poetry as an escape and a way to cope. He is very talented for his age and experience. He is always trying out new poetry methods and just doing what works for what he is trying to express. more…

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