She Lies In Shallow Water



She Lies In Shallow Water

She lies in shallow water, eyes fixed upon the sky.
Unseen by fishermen in boats who fish and drift on by.
Another rotting tree branch falls with a gentle splashing kiss,
They search and searched for quite some time, she felt them for a while.
They came and went with boats and dogs but deep inside she knew
This soft cold bed of mud, would hold her closed against their eyes.
She will not move again.

Wind whipped ripples on water, distort the liquid light
Alone she keeps her lovers sleep, she know that this is it.
The cold and quiet trickling tide ebbs and flows again
The rustling reeds make music, for a lovers final rest.
She doesn't know who laid her here, no memory of he
Who lightly brushed her once red hair and slowly loved her less.
Then told the cops she just left town.

Time will hide the smallest trace of evidence of harm.
The kids will soon get used to calling daddy's girfriend 'mum'
Once a year perhaps a friend will stop to speak some words,
To say how much she's missed and float a small bouquet of flowers.
But he, he will never visit here nor let the kids play near,
His guilty heart apart from fear will keep his distance fixed.
Love fell drowning there.

She lies in shallow water, looking fixed up at the sky.
The seasons come, and come and go, still mark the tidal ebb and flow.
Time will have no meaning and memory will fade,
The water shallow, dark and cold will not give up it's prize.
The kids are grown and scattered now and he has long since passed
There's no more flowers or words of grief, just shadows drifting by.
She will not move again.

About this poem

Every year in the UK, an MP stands up in the houses of parliament and reads the list of all the women and girls in the UK who were murdered by men in the previous year. The reading was attended last year by only three male MPs.

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Written on February 15, 2024

Submitted by skywest on February 27, 2024

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Scheme x aaxxxbC xxcxxxx xxxxxxx axxbxaC
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,608
Words 329
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 7, 7, 7, 7

Nicola Rosetti

Nicola Rosetti is best know for her work as a producer in the music industry and for the early career of bands such as Coldplay and Keene. She has also penned songs for the band 'Amelie's Telescope' and latterly turning back to her younger days with poetry. more…

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3 Comments
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a haunting and beautifully written poem! The imagery and emotions conveyed are truly captivating. The way you describe the woman's final resting place in shallow water is both poignant and powerful.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to maybe provide a bit more background or context to the story. It would be interesting to learn more about the relationship between the woman and the man who left her there, to add even more depth to the narrative.

    Overall, I absolutely love the poetic language and the overall atmosphere that you've created in this piece. Keep up the fantastic work!
     
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  • paulw.71370
    This poem presents a powerful and striking analysis of the disturbing and all-too-real issue of violence against women. Specifically, as I read this poem, my mind kept going back to the numerous unsolved murders of Native American women and other victims of abuse, including their families, communities, and children. 
    LikeReply1 month ago
  • WJHartung
    The story told within was complete, compelling, and moving. I liked its pace and was humbled my tis message.
    LikeReply1 month ago

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