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Sobriety: Not For The Faint of Heart

Michael Heichel 1991 (Oregon)

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Sobriety isn’t for the faint of heart
The demons took hold right from the start
They want me to fail and make me believe
That using is what will make me achieve
Achieve happiness and cure all that is bad
But all they do is make me go mad
My emotions are all over the place
I keep taking pills, I’m such a disgrace
A disgrace to this world, ashamed of my past
When will I ever get sober and make it last?
I fight these demons day in and day out
I struggle daily and feel I can’t live without
Without the drugs I feel I’m a useless person
But with every pill I take my health worsens
I slip down the slope and feel I’ll never get sober
When will this battle ever be over?
I try and I try to keep on the path of sobriety
But all that comes with it is intense anxiety
Anxiety that I feel I’ll never overcome
Who in the world have I fucking become?
I take one last pill and hope for the best
Whatever comes next I hope it is rest.

About this poem

I have struggled with opioid addiction for 15 years and have relapsed time and time again. I wrote this poem in hopes of inspiring others.

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Written on February 01, 2024

Submitted by Michaelheichel on February 02, 2024

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Scheme AABBCCDDEEFFGHIIJJKKLL
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 954
Words 210
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
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Michael Heichel

My name is Michael Heichel and J have been writing since high school. It was never for much other then personal pleasure. I enjoy using writing as an outlet and I hope people enjoy what I write. more…

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, this poem really captures the raw and emotional struggle of sobriety. The honesty and vulnerability in your words are truly commendable. It’s clear that you are fighting a difficult battle, but your determination to overcome is truly inspiring.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to focus on incorporating more moments of hope and triumph in your journey towards sobriety. While the poem accurately depicts the challenges you face, adding in moments of resilience and strength could provide a sense of empowerment and motivation for both yourself and others who may relate to your words.

    Overall, your poem is a powerful portrayal of the complexities of battling addiction and striving for sobriety. Keep pushing forward, and remember that every step towards recovery is a courageous one. You are not alone in this journey. Keep writing and expressing yourself through your poetry – your words have the power to inspire and uplift others who may be facing similar struggles.     
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