Dreaming in Intuition



My thought now dreams in intuition
and hardly responds on occasion,
For all the effort I make for it to waken
I get not response since then.

What call will it react to
And when will it get up,
all are up in the air
I wonder when will the command come in power.

I am now held up
below the time gap
and my die-heart search for the trigger
in order to cross over this zero river.

On the either bank of this time river I wonder
where plays all flute in open air
And this flute music will perhaps rouse from this slumber,
and will waken my thought ever after.
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Submitted by amal_k on March 05, 2024

Modified by amal_k on March 05, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAAX XBCD BXDD DCDD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 561
Words 122
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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  • EdwinRayTanguma
    This one makes me think of several things…In the case of the California drought I bathed every seventh day yet I was told to brush my teeth every day…In the case of Texas…I was told to bath every seventh day yet not to bush my teeth either for some silly reason…And I’m led to respond…Did anyone know that 80% of all Texas cattle production is currently burning???And what of it??? 
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