Unravel part II



Have you found a way
To unravel all of my seams
Every stitch sown tells a story
That’ll leave a lasting impression
Immune to your poison
Yet I’m left here still staggering
Hardly unraveled
What have you done to me
Shell shocked and petrified
My breath is too unsteady
And my eyes too blurry
I am but an unwelcome present
Unravel
Unravel the parts of me that I can no longer see clearly
Tear apart these strings that have kept me in such a prison
Watch as I self-deprecate into dissociation
You left me here as I have asked of you
My lung’s filled with overflowing insanity
Yet why have I not been unfolded
Unraveled
Every piece of me still lingers in the air I cannot breathe
Inside my own anechoic chamber
All these sounds are deafening
Unravel me
For the sake of my sanity
My breath still runs ragged
My heart’s beat a bit pathetic
There’s no drops left of this poison
Unravel the rest of me
For I am sick of this insanity
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Written on February 07, 2024

Submitted by Arx7Echo on February 08, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDDEFCGCCHICDDJCKFLMECCKNDCC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 935
Words 176
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 30

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