Unravel part II
Elijah Ramos 1995
Have you found a way
To unravel all of my seams
Every stitch sown tells a story
That’ll leave a lasting impression
Immune to your poison
Yet I’m left here still staggering
Hardly unraveled
What have you done to me
Shell shocked and petrified
My breath is too unsteady
And my eyes too blurry
I am but an unwelcome present
Unravel
Unravel the parts of me that I can no longer see clearly
Tear apart these strings that have kept me in such a prison
Watch as I self-deprecate into dissociation
You left me here as I have asked of you
My lung’s filled with overflowing insanity
Yet why have I not been unfolded
Unraveled
Every piece of me still lingers in the air I cannot breathe
Inside my own anechoic chamber
All these sounds are deafening
Unravel me
For the sake of my sanity
My breath still runs ragged
My heart’s beat a bit pathetic
There’s no drops left of this poison
Unravel the rest of me
For I am sick of this insanity
Font size:
Written on February 07, 2024
Submitted by Arx7Echo on February 08, 2024
- 52 sec read
- 1 View
Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABCDDEFCGCCHICDDJCKFLMECCKNDCC |
---|---|
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 935 |
Words | 176 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 30 |
Translation
Find a translation for this poem in other languages:
Select another language:
- - Select -
- 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
- 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
- Español (Spanish)
- Esperanto (Esperanto)
- 日本語 (Japanese)
- Português (Portuguese)
- Deutsch (German)
- العربية (Arabic)
- Français (French)
- Русский (Russian)
- ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
- 한국어 (Korean)
- עברית (Hebrew)
- Gaeilge (Irish)
- Українська (Ukrainian)
- اردو (Urdu)
- Magyar (Hungarian)
- मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
- Indonesia (Indonesian)
- Italiano (Italian)
- தமிழ் (Tamil)
- Türkçe (Turkish)
- తెలుగు (Telugu)
- ภาษาไทย (Thai)
- Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
- Čeština (Czech)
- Polski (Polish)
- Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
- Românește (Romanian)
- Nederlands (Dutch)
- Ελληνικά (Greek)
- Latinum (Latin)
- Svenska (Swedish)
- Dansk (Danish)
- Suomi (Finnish)
- فارسی (Persian)
- ייִדיש (Yiddish)
- հայերեն (Armenian)
- Norsk (Norwegian)
- English (English)
Citation
Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:
Style:MLAChicagoAPA
"Unravel part II" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 29 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/180657/unravel-part-ii>.
Discuss the poem Unravel part II with the community...
Report Comment
We're doing our best to make sure our content is useful, accurate and safe.
If by any chance you spot an inappropriate comment while navigating through our website please use this form to let us know, and we'll take care of it shortly.
Attachment
You need to be logged in to favorite.
Log In