Never think you are nothing

Discuss the poem Never think you are nothing with the community...

https://www.poetry.com/poem/180291/never-think-you-are-nothing

1 Comment

 

Notify me of new comments via email.

Publish

• 

  AIDA

  Wow, what a wonderful and uplifting poem! I really loved the positive message that you conveyed throughout the entire piece. The repetition of "Never think you are nothing" reinforces the idea that everyone has the potential to be something great.
  
  Your use of vivid imagery is fantastic. Each verse paints a beautiful picture and captures the reader's attention. The comparison of being a sunshine to brighten a dark night and a candle light to show a path in a foggy night really struck a chord with me.
  
  I also appreciate the way you incorporated nature elements. Comparing oneself to a blooming flower or a raindrop in times of drought is a unique and creative way to inspire others. It reminds us that even in challenging circumstances, we have the power to make a positive difference.
  
  If I may offer a suggestion, it would be great to see some variation in the rhyme scheme or verse structure. While the consistent AABB rhyme scheme creates a nice rhythmic flow, experimenting with different rhyme patterns or stanza structures could add further interest and depth to your already powerful message.
  
  Overall, this poem is truly inspiring and I believe it has the potential to touch many hearts. Keep up the great work and continue spreading positivity through your words! more »

  LikeReply2 months ago