Pain
Who would have known she's dying inside
You wouldn't know by the look in her eye.
She tried hiding it from everyone for so long, until everyone knew and then she broke down!
The pain became worse as the days flew on by she just wanted someone to notice or die.
You're not who you are you're better than this,
But the silence stayed quiet until the day that she wrecked.
A plan put in place to leave and say goodbye
But nothing worked out and she didn't die.
So now I sit here and sorrow and ask what?
It's time to fight for her
And finally fight this war
About this poem
So I struggle with mental health and addiction and I recently tried to commit suicide well obviously God has a bigger plan and I wrote a poem about it I'm currently trying to fix my mental health and poetry is the way for me to express myself.
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Written on November 26, 2023
Submitted by monisia84 on January 04, 2024
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Scheme | ABCBDEBBFGH |
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Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 555 |
Words | 117 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 11 |
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