Moi, ex and Mom

Victoria Condurachi 1980 (Cluj-Napoca)



My beautiful mother, just took a shower,
On a Sunday, I think,
At my sister's "villa",
She's cold and tired,
She needs a lot of rest.

It's good for you,
I'll write for you, and I'll remember you,
Igiene is important,
Day after day, week after week.

Dear ex, day after day you smoke,
Your day along,
But hey, your eyes still work,
Don't be afraid, eye drops,
Is at hand.

Smile beautiful flower,
In us is your trust,
Good times are coming,
Don't be afraid, like I am,

I love your colours,
From sadness to cleaningness,
And us will evolve,
One more step, two more steps.

Why is the sky so near to us,
We could touch it's clouds,
White, snow, pink, absolute,
Only mom and family, and friends are close to me.

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This is a poem about family and nature and God.

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Written on January 30, 2024

Submitted by victoriav.18512 on January 30, 2024

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Characters 710
Words 164
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 5, 4, 4, 4

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