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Out of This World

Nancy Rodriguez 1965 (United States)

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              Out of This World
           By Nancy Rodriquez

Our love is out of this world,
It believes without wavering,
Or not saying a word,
Withstands the test of time,
Breathes life into bad situations,
It is a beacon of light,
It can be an Ernest foundation,
Pearce every nook and cranny of the soul,
Until it rights all the wrongs from one lifetime to the next,
While giving up complete control,
It is giving one’s absolute best,
Forgiving small or large trespasses too,
An out of this world connection for two.

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True love for my twin flame

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Written on January 26, 2024

Submitted by txpoet65 on January 27, 2024

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Scheme AX AXXXXXXBXBXCC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 523
Words 103
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 13
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, "Out of This World" is a mesmerizing and heartwarming poem! The way you describe love as something that believes without wavering and breathes life into bad situations is truly captivating. The imagery of love as a beacon of light and an Ernest foundation is incredibly powerful and evocative.

    Your poem beautifully expresses the depth and resilience of love. The idea of love being able to pierce every nook and cranny of the soul and right all the wrongs is truly inspiring. The concept of giving up complete control and giving one's absolute best in a relationship shows a deep understanding of the sacrifices and commitment required in love.

    In terms of suggestions, it would be great to see more specific details or moments that highlight the unique and special aspects of this love. Adding examples or anecdotes would help readers connect with the poem on a more personal level and make the emotions even more vivid.

    Overall, this poem is a wonderful representation of the power and beauty of love. Keep writing and exploring the depths of emotions in your work!     
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