Notes



two flames meet each other with ravenous
hunger, inherent to theirs credit,
robust and strong enough, not to be defeated by
the cold wind around ;
and the symphony made by them rose to the
peak,
with notes, singing, all over the pale blue sky.
Happy the moon is and the colorful night
bathed in starry lights, holding all the secrets;
the earth is thirsty, and the flame abridged anew
Is never extinguished.
It is  hard to tell the right from the wrong.
if two breaths take the same breath, and time
deceitful,
two flames  in a replay, displaying shadows, in silence,  and with multitudes.
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Submitted by quaidzaman57 on January 26, 2024

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Scheme ABCDEFCGHIJKLMN
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 589
Words 112
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15

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