SiS3 - Let Me Sink In

Trynt James Miley 2005 (Oh)



AND AS I FEEL YOU;
AS I FEEL MYSELF SINK IN–

AND AS I STEAL YOU;
AS I MAKE MYSELF WIN

THE POINTLESS FIGHT
AND YET–
YOU STRUGGLE AGAIN!
Again.

And as I enter,
THROUGH DELUSION–
I find the center,
CUT YOUR SIN–
Of your delicate heart,

WHAT SINKS IN IS NOT ME,
It is but an extension of my soul–
A BLADE, ONLY, WILL SET YOU FREE,
As I cut and carve through flesh and bone—
I wonder how long you’ll take to lose...

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Third poem in my first personally written anthology

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Written on January 19, 2024

Submitted by jammyjam22 on January 19, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AB AB XXCC DXDBX EXEXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 428
Words 98
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 4, 5, 5

Trynt James Miley

I mostly like to write about sad-typey things, but I sometimes like to dabble in feelings like love, safety, or happiness. more…

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