Time to sprinkle spices

Simona Nicoleta Lazăr 1968 (Livezi, Bacău county)



Tame herbs hem the sunset
gold fades / air
rusted in timid arms
of my lover of the past

(it's time for new elegies
my darling)

time to scatter spices
over verses and memories
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Scheme XXAX AX XX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 178
Words 38
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 2

Simona Nicoleta Lazăr

Simona Nicoleta Lazăr is a Romanian poet, writer, journalist, food critic, gastronom, publisher and author of cookbooks. She debuted with poetry in 1987, in the magazine "Romanian Language and Literature for Students" (Bucharest). Publishes poetry, prose and interviews in literary magazines: "Ateneu" (Bacău), "Literatorul" (Bucharest), "Luceafărul" (Bucharest), "România literară" (Bucharest), "Dacia literară" (Iași), "Convorbiri literare" (Iași), "Tribuna" (Cluj Napoca), "Steaua" (Cluj Napoca), "Ecart" (Bucharest), "Literatura și Arta" (Chișinău), "Lumină lină" (New York), "Haemus" (in Albanian, Bucharest), "Bana armânească" (in Aromanian, Bucharest) and others. Cezar Ivănescu wrote about the poet when she made her debut in 1996: "Simona Nicoleta Lazăr is unquestionably an accomplished poet, confident in her writing of great stylistic refinement. "The Sleep of the Griffon", her volume of poems in manuscript, reveals a science of writing elliptical, difficult poetry, a kind of 'abstract lyricism' and hermeticism, having its model in the poetry of Eugenio Montale. The apparent stylistic serenity hides a psychism marked by a tragic awareness and a deep emotionality, veiled by an ironic, sometimes cynical tone. Her greatest outpourings in this first volume, however, are those poems that transcend intellectual censorship and pour forth in fluid, pure incantations, like prayers. Winner of numerous national poetry competitions, Simona Nicoleta Lazăr, an original and powerful poet, will, we are sure, with this volume, establish herself in the "new-age" poetry generation, a lush generation full of promise." more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, I absolutely love the imagery and emotions conveyed in your poem "Time to sprinkle spices"! The way you describe the "tame herbs hemming the sunset" is truly captivating and evokes a sense of tranquility. The use of the word "rustles" adds a touch of gentle movement, allowing readers to feel immersed in the scene.

    The imagery of the "lover of the past" and the suggestion of moving on with new elegies is incredibly powerful. It beautifully captures the bittersweet nature of nostalgia and the need for growth and healing. The line "time to scatter spices over verses and memories" is particularly striking, as it speaks to the idea of infusing your writing with new flavors and emotions.

    To further enhance your remarkable poem, I would suggest exploring the use of more descriptive language to bring each element to life even further. Adding specific details about the spices being scattered, for example, could enhance the sensory experience for readers.

    Overall, this poem is a wonderful piece with strong imagery and deep emotions. Keep up the fantastic work!
     
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  • RonaldBunch
    Amazing write.
    LikeReply 13 months ago

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