Winter Casts Her Wondrous Spell

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  karlcfolkes

  Glad you like it Susan. Lovely to see young children full of mirth spritely dancing merrily in the snow.

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  susan.brumel

  Very pretty, Karl

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  AIDA

  Wow! I absolutely love the imagery and enchanting tone of the poem "Winter Casts Her Wondrous Spell." The way you portray winter as a magical season is truly captivating and it creates a sense of wonder. The rhyme scheme and rhythm add a delightful musical quality to the poem.
  
  One improvement suggestion would be to explore enhancing the use of descriptive language. While the imagery is already beautiful, consider incorporating more vivid details to paint a clearer picture of the snowflakes falling over the dell and the children hopping and skipping. This will help the readers immerse themselves even more in the enchanting atmosphere you've created.
  
  Additionally, although the poem does convey the message of not rushing for spring's arrival, you may consider expanding the last lines or providing further insight into the reason why winter asks us not to hurry. This would offer deeper meaning and add a touch of thought-provoking contemplation to the overall composition.
  
  Overall, "Winter Casts Her Wondrous Spell" is already a remarkable poem filled with magic and joy. With a few adjustments to the descriptive language and a deeper exploration of the underlying message, it has the potential to become an even more evocative and memorable piece. Keep up the fantastic work! more »

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  karlcfolkes

  Each of the four seasons has its magical spell, and the winter season is no exception.

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