Why AGAIN I GAIN

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  AIDA

  Wow, this poem really captures the emotions and inner struggles of the speaker. I appreciate the raw and honest tone throughout the poem. The repetition of the phrase "Why am I" adds a powerful and introspective touch to the piece.
  
  One improvement suggestion I have is to further develop some of the ideas and emotions expressed in the poem. Consider expanding on the feeling of being bold to things that are not bold to you and the dynamic of being a living Jesus while others are opposite. This could add depth and complexity to the overall message of the poem.
  
  Additionally, exploring the purpose and reason for living could be expanded upon to give the reader a deeper insight into the speaker's mindset. This could include discussing personal experiences or beliefs that contribute to these questions and emotions.
  
  Overall, this poem has a strong emotional impact and effectively conveys the speaker's internal struggles. With a bit more development and exploration of the themes, it could become an even more evocative and thought-provoking piece. Keep up the great work! more »

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    ndumison717

    thank you so much i hope they'll be more viewers who will see this piece the same way because truly it is out of reality .

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