Concrete grace
I was so blind for so long
Sliding into a world of drugs and sin
The most melancholy of songs
I couldn't for the life of me find a win
But you were there taking each singular blow
Feeling my pain
drowning in my sorrow
Lord I thank you for the tribulation and pain
For the strength to stand & never have to be in those depths again
You are my rock I stand firm to
My concrete grace
God you are my one & only point of view
How I long to seek your face
About this poem
This is basically all about hope & faith. I found this poem after a gruesome hospital stay. My Dr.s made me stay there a week (literally bed bound. When ever I even sat up my bed alarm went off) took me off all of my meds (which threw me into detox) to make me seize so they can catch where it's coming from in the brain for a 3rd (
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Written on November 24, 2023
Submitted by Blest474 on December 18, 2023
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| Scheme | X A X A B C B C X DE D E |
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| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 460 |
| Words | 107 |
| Stanzas | 12 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1 |
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