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With My RAA

Bhavani T 2001 (tamilnadu)

Soliloquy
With my RAA
Everything I see;
Let it disappear with my eyes!
All I am looking for
 May lose with me!
Everything I want
Shall get away from me!
Everything what I think
 Shall bury in my mind!
All the memories
Shall dissolve in the air!
I longed for my life in the dissolved air!
Keeping the water droplets in the eyes!
Looking at the hand line
 Will solve my future
The dissolved air recalls the creator of the line
My creator drew these lines not to solve my future
But to sculpt it!
He knows everything about me!
I threw stones at him
 But he came like a shadow,
He decorates my empty life!
He is my RAA.!!!!!!

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This poem explains the relationship between the creator and the human

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Written on December 12, 2023

Submitted by paulinbhavani on December 11, 2023

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Scheme ABCABDBEFGAACHAHAIBJKLA
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 619
Words 133
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
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Bhavani T

BHAVANI.T is an Under Graduate student in English from SFR College for Women,Sivakasi. She had completed Certificate Program in Creative Writing with“A+” Grade, Certificate Program in Advanced Communication Skills, Communication Method and Presentation Skills.She had B1 level in BEC by Cambridge University. Her poems were published in Tranquil vol-2 book ,Enigma vol-1 book,Sohrosyne vol-5 were published by Quillhouse,The Life Guide , Diversifying Culture ,Familia - Tales of Bonds were published by Natals, The Dusky Moon,The slice of life vol_1,The Slice of life vol_2 were published by thought Hymn.Her blog was named as Updatingenglish.art.blog with foreign followers.The uniqueness of her poem was usage of words. She had participated and won prizes in Mime, essay writing ,Painting and state level inter College competitions. more…

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