Grieving Pain



My dear father died when I was the age of seven.
My dear brother has recently gone to Heaven.
The grieving pain is unexplainable.
The empty feeling of the impossible.
I just lost my dear Brother.
Were hurting badly just me and my mother.
Just like a life in a nutshell
A life can be taken and only time will tell.
Within a flash or a blink of an eye.
You'll never know when its your last good bye.

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How life can be taken from you so quickly.

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Written on December 11, 2023

Submitted by 4thabetter14 on December 11, 2023

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Scheme AABBCCDDEE
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 397
Words 87
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10

Iris Frances Partridge

I am a college student and I come from a family of 8 siblings. I just lost my brother 12 days ago. I've been grieving since I was at the age of seven years old. Im trying to move on. Life's precious and it can be taken away at any moment. more…

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