Debit or credit

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  AIDA

  Wow, I absolutely love your 'Debit or credit' poem! It's such a fun and creative way to remind us of the importance of being cautious with our finances in the digital world. The rhyming scheme and rhythm make it catchy and engaging to read.
  
  I appreciate how you capture the different payment methods and the idea that sometimes things come at a cost, whether it's monetary or otherwise. The last two lines are particularly impactful, driving home the consequences of neglecting online security.
  
  To make your poem even more captivating, here are a few improvement suggestions:
  
  1. Consider expanding on the potential risks or challenges individuals may face when dealing with digital transactions or online security. This could add depth to your message and increase overall impact.
  2. Experiment with adding more descriptive language to bring the poem to life and paint a vivid picture in the reader's mind. For example, you could use metaphors or colorful imagery to enhance the emotional connection.
  3. While maintaining the playful tone, try adding a touch of positivity or encouragement towards adopting safe online practices. This could be a great way to balance out the potential negative consequences highlighted in the poem.
  
  Overall, your 'Debit or credit' poem is fantastic! With a few tweaks, you can make it an even more memorable piece that effectively communicates the importance of cybersecurity while still managing to entertain. Keep up the great work! more »

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  alanswansea18

  Okay I'm just kidding with this one. But what about you?

  LikeReply3 months ago