One Close Moment



I remember the day when we both were sitting together, with the notebooks opened.
It was closer than in my dreams. You were prettier than i imagined.

I experienced the sweetness of wind,
I was flying above and through the forest in joy,
experiencing the wild sounds,
the cool air coming through the dancing trees,
sound of water dropping on the trees.

Very soon the bell rang, And i saw you running away faster than Usain Bolt,
After that day you were taking bath three times a day, Three times a day.

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Most of poems are based on the real life events happened or felt by the poets, including this one. It is about a special moment of joy the poet felt when he was a student.

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Written on January 04, 2024

Submitted on January 04, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA XXXBB XX
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 511
Words 102
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 2, 5, 2

C. Acharya

Born in Odisha, India. Mr. C. Acharya is a good poet. more…

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  • Giselavigil
    Enjoyed reading this daydream with its comic relief in the last stanza. good job.
    LikeReply 43 months ago

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