Why Did I Use Cruise Control (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



Why Did I Use Cruise Control   (Bussokusekika)

It was like NASCAR
Slamming into the brick wall
Due to wet roadway
It is a small miracle
I came out of it unscathed
Why did I use cruise control

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   12/30/2023

About this poem

I usually don’t use cruise control…Over the last 10 years I may have used it 10 times at the most…Live and learn…And everyone was flying past me as if I were a snail…It almost makes me wonder if someone may have tampered wit Blu while I was grabbing a bite to eat in Newberry Park???I guess such thoughts are only proof of my paranoia…It was a trip sliding in circles I must admit…I don’t know how those NASCAR drivers slam into those walls at 200+ MPH…My hats of to them…⛄️

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Written on December 30, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on December 30, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X XXXXXX X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 237
Words 46
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1

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  • Giselavigil
    After reading this, I thought that although it is a factual story it can be a metaphor for life. How many times do we travel too fast on the wet roads of life? Probably too many.
    LikeReply3 months ago

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