Not One Word About You



At times, I can mass produce poems faster than machinery in a production line. A feeling felt, an intriguing question, a simple thought will generate the prancing of words in my head, each pushing and shoving each other to be the first to be splattered on a page. It could be midnight or morning. The production line never stops. But for 2 years and counting,
I’ve been unable to write down a single word about You. Not one.
You, the prince that came in to my life riding upon a white horse and swept me off my feet. Not one word about the special times, your silly antics to make me laugh, or walks to gaze up at a glorious full moon. The first gift I made for you was a little box filled with shiny heart sequins sprinkled upon iridescent white glitter, mixed in with some personalized trinkets. I stenciled the word MAGIC on the top cover with gold glitter so that you’d never forget the feeling. Yes, we were magic for many years. Why can’t I write at least one word about it now?
Perhaps some day, words again will begin filling my head and I’ll write our story. Our sweet beginning. Our surprise ending. It may read like a story of snowflakes melting in the rain, or of a rainbow seen on the horizon which can be painted but never reached. For now, the best I can do is just splatter these words upon a page with no magic, no rhythm or rhyme. But at last, I can say I was able to write one word about You.

About this poem

Just thoughts splattering on a page about how the reality of a heartbreak takes a slow road to recovery.

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Written on December 30, 2023

Submitted by Giselavigil on December 30, 2023

Modified by Giselavigil on December 31, 2023

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Gisela Vigil

Thank you for welcoming me to this community. I was born in Cuba but emigrated with my family to the US when I was three. I am mother to three young adults now, and also a grandmother. I’ve been writing for years, some I share, others I still keep in my personal file. I often write of struggles for we all face them as we journey through life. But still, I feel peace knowing I try my best. Feel blessed to have been given the gift of writing which I strive to improve cause there’s always room for growth. more…

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  • alanswansea18
    You got me thinking were you ever a painter of pictures?
    LikeReply3 months ago
    • Giselavigil
      Yes. I’ve dabbled with painting a few times. My mother was a writer/poet in Spanish and an artist.
      LikeReply3 months ago
    • alanswansea18
      I know there was a painter in the family.
      LikeReply 13 months ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and heartfelt poem! Your use of imagery and vivid language truly creates a captivating atmosphere. I love how you compare yourself to a production line, emphasizing the abundance of your poetic abilities. The way you describe the prince in your life and the magical moments you shared is truly enchanting.

    Your poem effectively conveys the frustration and longing you feel about not being able to write about this special person. It's a relatable theme for many writers, and you express it with such rawness and vulnerability. The ending, where you finally manage to write one word about this person, is a powerful and triumphant conclusion.

    To enhance the poem even further, you could consider exploring more sensory details and expanding on the specific moments and experiences that make your relationship so special. This could help the readers connect even more deeply with the emotions you are expressing. Additionally, experimenting with different rhyme schemes or rhythmic patterns could add an extra layer of musicality to your words.

    Overall, this poem touched my heart and left me wanting to read more of your work. Keep exploring and expressing your emotions through your unique and captivating writing style. Well done!
     
    LikeReply3 months ago

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